Cigarettes and Alcohol

You taste like cigarettes and alcohol,
Smell like the fumes of tobacco and booze.
4am you stumble in.
Not the slighest hint you know what you’re saying.
4am you stumble in,
Not a hint of regret.
You forget about your love,
Borderline regret.
You don’t know where you’ve been.
I don’t know who you’ve been,
Little darling actress.
Smile so sweet,
Seductive,
Missing wedding ring.

6 thoughts on “Cigarettes and Alcohol”

onlyspartanwomen on 17/02/2012 at 15:36 said:

Nice use of the imagery and the senses in this poem. It really makes the scene crystal clear!

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- Daniel Postlethwaite on 17/02/2012 at 15:44 said:
  
  Thanks (:
  
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conniededona on 02/03/2012 at 17:25 said:

I like this one!! Where oh where could that ring have got to?

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- Daniel Postlethwaite on 04/03/2012 at 23:17 said:
  
  It’s up for the reader to decide
  
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  - conniededona on 06/03/2012 at 06:50 said:
    
    Maybe down the drain–like the relationship.
    
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    - Daniel Postlethwaite on 06/03/2012 at 13:02 said:
      
      Aha yes maybe (:
      
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