I figure it was time to let you guys know my idea, see if I can get a little feedback before tomorrow! After around 12:00GMT I won’t be able to make major changes but for now I figured I would share my idea with you guys to see if there is any improvements I can make before pitching tomorrow.
To the write is a picture of the pillars that are mentioned below. I am including both the premise and the synopsis.
The working title at the moment is “Divide” because of the divide that separates them etc. If you can think of a better one though let me know!