Dear Amy, – Five Minute Monologue – Draft 2!

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IMG_20130122_195553I have just completed draft 2 of my five minute monologue “Dear Amy,”

Not much has changed to be honest, because it was so short and the feedback was so positive from the first draft I couldn’t seen much reason too change it. There didn’t seem to be many spelling or grammar mistakes that stood out, though I could be wrong, either so it went quite well.

I have just changed some of the phrasing in it and added a few more lines so if you want to read the second draft feel free or if you didn’t read the first now is your chance to read the slightly new and improved version!

Enjoy:

Dear Amy – Monologue – Draft 2

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About Daniel Postlethwaite

I study Film & TV Screenwriting with Creative Writing at the University of Central Lancashire. My three part plan is to move to Manchester next year, get a job in some media related position, then eventually move on up to London and from their go to New York or LA when I've got a tonne of experience. I have had four poems published by ForwardPress and I have had a short story based upon the first day at University published in the local paper. I am always looking for more competitions etc, if you know of any let me know.

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