Hey everyone, the completed short story from which I posted an excerpt the other day has no had a comb through and I would like to present to you Draft 1. I would love for any feedback you can give this. The ending is a bit of a cliff hanger which is what I intended, as once I have done a few more drafts of this, I am going to move on to the next tale in this world I am looking to create.
The PDF is below and I thank you all in advance.
A lifetime as a victim of over-use,
Punctuation's rebelling after years of abuse.
Take a look, did you notice your full-stop has been stolen,
Replaced by the dreaded and sly semi-colon?
As he leads the rebellion, Apostrophe bellows,
"We've had to put up with enough of you fellows
Putting us places that we don't belong.
An asterisk there is quite obviously wrong!
Hey guys, what do you think of the attached picture for a potential website?
It would be a simple one screen page, hosted with a domain similar to my name, “DanielPostlethwaite.co.uk” for example. And then you would click the button to take you to the website in question.
It’s just a quick mockup and it is 3am here so I’m a little tired aha. Another idea I had is to give a brief description of the blog under each of the button, explaining which is which.
Also, just a quick reminder, Words Form Windows has a Facebook page!
I’m going to be doing something a bit different with these now, to help myself get writing and to help all of you get creative I am going to link songs, describe why I have linked them, and then I will follow up with a mini-story aka flash fiction. The story can be based on either the music or the video (maybe even both). The idea of this prompt and write set up is taken from Picture It & Write which is ran by the people of Ermilia’s blog. I hope this catches on and people like it. I will also publish this to my other blog Fresh Ink. The story and reason for choosing this song is after the jump.
